USP-S Monster Mashup + Moto Gloves Finish Line

Good evening!!!))) Texture resolution 2K. The screenshots are of poor quality because I have a laptop, and its resolution is 1366x768. I apologize for the inconvenience.
Please rate and tell me what are the mistakes in my work. I will be grateful.

Model - Young Be
Skin port - Blossom:D & 1NSOMNIA
Gloves - One of them - > Slake,Daimon,iNSOMNiA